Feedback on Draft

I got some feedback from my draft version of the ancillary work from my teachers.

Firstly, The Advert;

I was told to add more dates into the tour as it would be normal for them to have up to about 10, not just 3, also I was told to either use venues or places not a mix because it is confusing.
I was then told to change the 'OUT NOW' sections o it's all on one line, and add in some more social media, so I added a twitter and facebook link for the audience.

Front;

My teacher said that the bottom of the album cover looked a bit plain and told em I should add a sticker or something to fill up the space a bit. I tried adding sticker's but thought they looked tacky and took away from the rest of the cover so I decided to leave it how it was. I did add the social media links to the back of the album though.

Inside;

My teacher finally said that the inside panel, next to the CD was plain and 'Didn't have anything on it' which was a simple design I was going for, using the pattern on the front and continuing it onto the inside. I decided not to change this as well.

My own personal changes were the CD colour, the black was too strong and looked quite bad so I changed it to  fit with the background colours and keep in theme, I also added a black strip in the crease like on the front just to help separate the panels and add a bit more action to it.