Evaluation Question 4

What have you learned from your audience feedback?

Paul Feedback:

Here's a few quotes of what he's said:

'Like the band logo... reminds me of the strokes'
This is very nice to hear, and related back to another band int he same genre therefore I know I have been able to create something that keeps to the conventions of existing projects.

'Black and grey feed... diamond blurry thing at the bottom' 'Reminds me of Nine Inch Nails'
He said he likes the colour theme, which was my main concern as the video is B/W but my ancillary isn't however, that didn't seem to be a problem as he linked both the projects together. Again he said it reminded him of another well known group which makes it seem professional.

'Logos in the right place'
I am happy to hear that everything looks alright in terms of layout as I had a problem with where I should place the logo as I wanted it centred but didn't want the name to look weird. This makes me confident that It all looks neat.

'Seen more information about the album.. review scores, prices'
'Very Basic'
These comments about the advert are a bit disappointing, I tried to keep to my simple theme but apparently I was too simple. I would go back and add in the information he wanted if I could and to make it more informative for my audience.

Finally he spoke about how he could link the two projects together which is very useful to know.

Feedback after cinema screening:

People said that they were very impressed with the video and thought it was "really good" the reactions in the screening were very good, we got a lot of clapping after and people being quite interested in it during the screening.

If I could go back I would re-shoot the singing scenes in order to make it seem more energetic as that's one of the criticisms we got. I also got told from Eli in another class (not on video) that the story was a little bit confusing and we could have made it clearer which is something I would like to do, maybe show an actual safe or have words in the video saying 'Diamond Heist' and things like that to make is super obvious.
One of my concerns was the black and white theme, I thought people would have wanted a bit of colour, however, in the feedback we were told that the black and white theme was very liked and good which makes me view the video differently and see it how the audience see's it, I'm glad they enjoyed the theme.

Someone said that they are able to link the video to the ancillary due to the use of diamonds obviously and slyly, for example the cards we used were of the suite diamonds to relate back to our theme which connects with the diamonds on our ancillary work.

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